Recently, I posted a poem called "Sundials in the Shade." While I like the poem, and have actually turned it into a song, for a long time, I've been dissatisfied with this verse:If we combined all mankind knows,It would…

Since I may be publishing soon, I'd very much like some opinions before I send my work out to strangers. You don't have to be techincal, of course, but please be honest. I'm posting an eclectic mix today: an early reli…